can someone please check my sentences for correctness?

1.Because the shoes lacked any aesthetic qualities, it was always found in the bargain bin. (CPX)
2.Because his speeches were all chaff, he lost many of his supporters. (CPX)
3.Because his remarks were so egregious, everyone left the party. (CPX)
4.Because he hadn’t exercised for a year, his muscles had become flaccid. (CPX)
5.Because there was no time left, the audience was not given the chance to foment questions for the speaker. (CPX)
6.Because his answers to the test were not germane, he failed his test. (CPX)
7.Because he refused to be baptized, John will never be hallowed. (CPX)
8.Because Rachael is very ugly, she relies on meretricious clothing to attract boys. (CPX)
9.Because John will never be hallowed, he will go to perdition. (CPX)
10.Because the plane was going to depart late, the passengers became querulous. (CPX)

1 – Change “it was” to “they were” – shoes are a plural noun.
5 – “foment” should be “forment”
6 -”his test” should be “the test”
7 – “he refused” should be “he refuses”

for starters. There may be other errors. The english construction here is very stilted – overly formal and pedantic.

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