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Rate my rap I'm in the canyon to the strip of land, grass and wash the skin under my shirt melting wrong eye peaked at ease with black leather Demond I sell crack in my eyes, so please with a big smile, I Crack Street vicious demons acting suspicious, while drug dealers and thieves Ambitous chain pulling feeling COC steam pots, medicine sent delecious smell spirit of deep water swimming with sharks and fish of thug rap real murderers killing Kats on the slopes of the LUV and the chains of passion Dimond neck and wrist, but fades when blinking stolen money or fashion I spit on the top of my dome as my brain Land toothless flow becomes deep cavities such as fillings dentail money, chickens, and the drug is more fly, ice, wind, and cars is more madness to kill When rap learn Kats has a flow on the mic Cuz evil is real short burn mc characters! plz rate

haha cool. I'll have a chance. Firstly its got a solid pace, which I think is very important because it reflects the tone of the song too. The same words are very interesting and fit together. "Dimond chains in the neck and wrist, but fades when flashing stolen money or fashion," The point that is cool here. I do not like modern hip-hop, because its gotten to the point that the texts are not any real weight and seriousness. Apart from the lyrics of Eminem whos is real for you, because he raps about real events and emotions. In general, I like your rap because Talk about abuse and tell their story, whether or not yours, and that is what makes it cool rap. I do not know how I can assess the 10, but I dig, so it continued! OUT Thanks peace.

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